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Dave13
Jan 2, 2006 16:32 GMT
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erusan , I understand what you mean about the flower on the right and looking at it I agree. Thanks for pointing that out.
Dave
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erusan
Jan 2, 2006 11:51 GMT
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A nice closeup. Difficult exposure with the frost on those flowers. It would have been nice if you kept the flower to the right in the frame as well, cutting it off suggests that we focus only on the foreground. And there, my eye keeps wandering in search for a place to hold on to, so to say.
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Dave13
Jan 1, 2006 21:23 GMT
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BC,I take onboard your comments thanks for taking the time.
jjdorsey,Thanks for the compliment
Buckshot, thanks for the tip about stopping down a little, I will try and bear that in mind.
royalLD, Cheers.
Dave
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royalLD
Jan 1, 2006 20:43 GMT
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Nice concept. I would prefer it a little less centered. Nice DOF. Good luck.
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Buckshot
Dec 31, 2005 14:38 GMT
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Cool shot. A stop down would have brought out a bit more detail in the snow....cool none the less
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Joaquin Honda-Moon
Dec 30, 2005 22:30 GMT
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Good DOF study and excellent exposure on that tricky snow.
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BC
Dec 30, 2005 21:11 GMT
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Shoot snow in direct sunlight and you'll likely have to compromise on the exposure. Here, the highlights are blown on the central focus of the shot. The depth of field is nice but the background is distracting. Perhaps shooting from a slightly higher angle would avoid the railings and allow for better control of the highlights.
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Dave13
Dec 30, 2005 15:17 GMT
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Thanks for your comments tancalvin and njsiva, looking again I see what you both mean about the snow, I will bear this in mind. Also the Idea of the crop interest me I shall give it a go thanks.
Dave
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njsiva
Dec 30, 2005 15:06 GMT
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Nice shot, well observed. Could be my monitor, but is the snow slightly overexposed? Well done.
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tancalvin
Dec 30, 2005 04:26 GMT
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Other than a blown out of the white ( at least on my screen). The other thing I would humbly suggest is to crop of the bottom 1/3 , this will pull the subject together onto the frame. I think it is a great effort for this shot. in my fav. Good luck.
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